Okay stumpy, followed ur advice (and thanks for the spoiler, i wouldnt be able to find that out with this glitch im experiencing). My overall expressions were: you're officially my favourite author to date (perhaps landing a little behind Springheel in storytelling)! Lost City, Constantine's Mansion, Krellek's Labyrinth, Shalebridge Cradle, The Mages Tower, this one, with a little twaking, earns a place between those many of my favourites. Critique: you could do something more to earn the players simpathy, make em feel like theyre in the characters skin, thus improving immersion (not sure what would do the trick, though). And a little digressing: Did anyone else notice the backside of (red) spiders looks like a demonic face? I was more than once scared when i mistook it for a floating demonic orb LOL