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Fieldmedic: that looks very moody. The dual streetlights may be a bit too fancy for an otherwise poor-looking locale (unless of course you have a reason for their presence).

Come the time of peril, did the ground gape, and did the dead rest unquiet 'gainst us. Our bands of iron and hammers of stone prevailed not, and some did doubt the Builder's plan. But the seals held strong, and the few did triumph, and the doubters were lain into the foundations of the new sanctum. -- Collected letters of the Smith-in-Exile, Civitas Approved

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Looking good, FM! What kind of theme are you aiming for with this one?

"No proposition Euclid wrote,

No formulae the text-books know,

Will turn the bullet from your coat,

Or ward the tulwar's downward blow

Strike hard who cares—shoot straight who can—

The odds are on the cheaper man."

 

From 'Arithmetic on the Frontier' by Rudyard Kipling

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I'd probably decrease the saturation on those lights a bit. Blue is fine, but here, the scene becomes almost cartoonish. Well, unless you are looking for that effect... but really, a more steely hue would most likely be better!

Come the time of peril, did the ground gape, and did the dead rest unquiet 'gainst us. Our bands of iron and hammers of stone prevailed not, and some did doubt the Builder's plan. But the seals held strong, and the few did triumph, and the doubters were lain into the foundations of the new sanctum. -- Collected letters of the Smith-in-Exile, Civitas Approved

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Very nice Xcen.

I'd like to see you use a patch for the street though and bend it down in the mid a bit. Right now it's a very 'square'/clean scene. Just a little bit of shape to the street would add a lot imo.

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That is good lighting and texture choice.

Come the time of peril, did the ground gape, and did the dead rest unquiet 'gainst us. Our bands of iron and hammers of stone prevailed not, and some did doubt the Builder's plan. But the seals held strong, and the few did triumph, and the doubters were lain into the foundations of the new sanctum. -- Collected letters of the Smith-in-Exile, Civitas Approved

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Looks good, although the shadows are awfully harsh. Do you have an ambient_world light? Also, you may want to turn of the shadows on the torch bracket.

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Glad to see more tombs in an FM, Sir Taffsalot!

 

That looks very nice and moody, Xcen. =3

"No proposition Euclid wrote,

No formulae the text-books know,

Will turn the bullet from your coat,

Or ward the tulwar's downward blow

Strike hard who cares—shoot straight who can—

The odds are on the cheaper man."

 

From 'Arithmetic on the Frontier' by Rudyard Kipling

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